WaSteLaNd

by alex   May 10, 2006


A barren wasteland, dark and lonely,
cages creatures most unholy.

The land is full of streams of blood,
all around is dirt and mud.

A place where day is dark as night,
and happiness is rare as light.

A land where all the gold is rusted,
and the church bells all are busted,
all the trees are set afire,
and the search for truth is dead and dire.

No more love or peace or freedom,
just the ghosts that roam,
and demons that chase you if you see them.

Filled with hate and death and fire,
this land can corrupt the darkest liar.

Here the rain will never stop,
here the land is filled of rock,
here your soul is torn with pain,
here evil floods, never contained.

Here is wasteland, where all is evil and all is dark,
here the banshees scream and the dogs bark.

Here is wasteland, forever is night, where evil roams,
and wrong is right.

Here is wasteland, the place of death, here the vil shall never rest.

But here in wasteland there is one life, not the death and not the night,
but here in wasteland there is one life, one life that will plunge,
and defeat the evil and win this fight.

Here in wasteland there is me, me who created this world to be.

So now the done will be un-done, to defeat the devils son, the devils son
is this planet, the planet in which i am the creator.

I am so the creator, soon to be its terminator, to make this land un-done,
i shall defeat the creator, the creator who is me, who will destroy this land soon to be.

So now i am dead, and this world is never again, this world filled of evil, and so is
the devils den.

To all those people that are now dead, i have over-come, and i am sorry, so i have said.

You wont be again, but this land shall be healed, an the oceans and forests and beautiful fields, animals and humans will soon be created, because this is the land they so have originated.

So this is not wasteland, it is gone forever.....So i will stay HERE with god, we shall watch you together.
-Alex Foster...

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  • 17 years ago

    by elly

    Uhm... no offence, but this makes no sense to me. Okay, I'm gonna point out some flaws, please don't take them offensively:
    1.) Your poem was rather long, so you might've wanted to cut that down
    2.) It was actually decent until you had the self insert, saying how you created that place, and how you said you were going to kill the creator, which was you.
    3.) The ending like, really really threw me off. I was like, 'okay cool' in the beginning. So, maybe you want to stick to one subject in particular? Don't start it off with a depressing tone, then move it to a lighter tone, it kind of messes things up.
    But I really do like the concept, keep writing!

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