by peter May 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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On this cold and lifeless ground |
by Sweet lig
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Ilove the way u wirte this line "let me be love or let me be hate" nice Q! perfect rhyming it has a great flowing the lines.. i love ur workd it was nice and very adorable so igive u 5/5 |
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Very good poem, |
by Natalie
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This was good. It reminded me of one of my best poems Rage and Love. But anywho, I think this one was done really well. You did a great job! 5/5 |