Why Doesn't He Love Me?

by Emma   May 12, 2006


Hear screaming from behind
I try to run and hide
his angry face
is what I wake up to at his place
He yells in a rage
Its like I'm trapped in a cage...
He wont let me go
I guess I'll never know
Why he is like this
He gives me one last kiss...
Then takes his sharpened knife
And begins to take my life
one stab and he is in
as I slowly bleed out his sins
He slowly walks away
as I begin to cry and pray...
"Why can't I see...
Why doesn't he love me?..."

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Emma

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney

    Very well worded.. wish i could do the same.

  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Short and simple but deep and effective the rhyme worked really well nice work xxALLYxx

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    This is really sad. keep up the good work like the rhyme going on keep it up 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Omg.. i so hope that was a metaphor, and if it was.. wow! that was an excellent poem, you had me tearing and cringing at the same time.. the short lines really added suspense to it and the flow was good! nice write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Reading this, i was overwhelmed. the simple rhyme scheme works very well in telling this poem. i felt slightly uneasy reading this, which inturn a poem that can stir any sort of emotion is always worth commenting and prasing. Well Done.

    GothicSorrow

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