Suicide

Great job girl same comment as the teacher with one of ur other poems huh needs more detail.. to me it is great less means more sometimes

Jenna

Shorty

This is a really sad one but great...keep up the good work

As it was already said if you look for more words, it would be a great poem, it is a good start and i know you got what it takes to make a wonderful poem.

I dont see why people down voted you. i thought it was interesting and going with the flow.. not bad and i give you A 5 .

It is realli good..sad but good..5/5

-manda

also thanks for comment on my poem 'voices'