Lost Love

by smile   May 15, 2006


L-ast to say good bye, please kiss away my pain.
O-n towards the next chapter, touching on insane.
S-lowly moving away, connecting as we part.
T-ime isn't on our side, as you slice through my broken heart.

L-ong gone the secret nights we had.
O-f long lost love, which drove us mad.
V-ery quietly taken, from beneath our perfect home,
E-verything i ever wanted and all i'll ever own.

wow lost love, this is a description and a half, i cry when i read it, really i do. the memories, the feelings, my lost love...how i long for you!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gabrielle

    Hi I loved it it's Valencia thank for the praise on my poem please visit my other poems and comment

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    This is great.. i think you should have a lot more faith in yourself, your poems have a lot of feeling.. keep it up ;) thanks for your comment on mine xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rich

    I love this! What talent! I'd love to be able to write like this.