One Last Circle

by smile   May 15, 2006


Out of my life,
Out of this world,
Dead as the child,
Whose waiting inside.

Sitting through the dark,
Crying in her dreams,
Nothing known will ever be seen.

Awoke with a kiss,
The caressing palms,
His gentle body,
She lies in his strong arms.

Darkest hair,
Striking deep eyes,
A heart to kill,
The man to save her life.

Stepped out of the shadows,
Showered in light,
A creature of the darkened night.
Knowing the sound,
Could it be love,
Or am i just losing my mind?

I'm here,
Round and round,
One last circle,
Our love has found,
I'm here,
Give me the sound,
One last kiss,
Our love is found.

Holding hands,
Embracing minds,
Missing the time
You said you were mine.

Sitting in the dark,
Crying through my dreams,
Love is lost,
Will it ever be seen?

Thinking of the kiss,
Singing our song,
Your gentle body,
My life barely goes on.

Your soft hair,
Deep blue eyes,
A heart to melt,
The girl who ruined my life.

Stepped into the shadows,
Out of sight,
A creature of the darkened night,
One breif sound,
Could it be love,
Or am i just hell bound?

I'm here,
Losing the fight,
One last circle,
Stay the night,
I'm here but your not quite,
Stay forever,
For our love i'll fight.

All i ever wanted was you in my arms,
The way you giggled our last love song.
Now your gone,
At long last,
Stolen chances
Our time has passed.

i wrote this kinda from my one true loves point of view, when i was in a 6 mth relationship with a horrible horrible man.
begins with me being all sad and lonely, then jay (who i hate) saves me and we're all loved up etc, but si (my 1 true love) *sob sob* gets upset and stuff,....oh they had a fight you know, thats real, go simon! he gave Jay a black eye, i was all like, aww poor jay, bad simon, because jay made me, but really i was like yeah!!!!!
haha that was when we were together, you know.
anyway poem...it's naff

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    I liked this one... your a really good poet and you should definately keep up the good work 5/5 definately -Jen-

  • 17 years ago

    by LaughableHeartbreak

    Wow, i like this, it's nice!!! keep up the good work, your poems not that bad like you said it was.:)

    Thanks for rating mine!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Star

    This one was amazing! I loved every last word of it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Star

    This one was amazing! I loved every last word of it.

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    by Aaron Foster

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