Passive

by Strange Angel   May 16, 2006


Passive employee
Of life
You sit back and watch
The world pass you by
Minute by minute it's
Slipping away
Falls through you fingers like
Water.

Cascading and tumbling
Drenches you in opportunity
And still you gaze
Glassy eyed
And watch
Silently.

So detached
So numb
You struggle to feel
Alive.

Grasp out and hold it
Shake it and laugh with it
Joy
But you're the passive employee of life
And you sit back and watch
The world pass
You by.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    This is an amazing poem. and i actually mean it...
    its very unique and its funny how i can relate so much. its got tons and tons of emotion...
    i like the analogy...just the thought...
    an employee of life. so original and ....
    true, in a way.
    marvelous poem.
    5/5...!!!!!
    thanks for the comment btw it means alot =]
    ur poetry is amazing i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    This could reach out to soo many people! the emotion and the...ARGH¬! its so moving. shame on anyone who reads this poem and doesnt comment! it deserves thousands.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Oooh could almost be a song

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