Trapped!

Hunting for escape
Pushing at the wall
Hitting the ground
Trying not to fall,

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^^^ Loved it. This was really good. Though it was short, You expressed so much in it. I don't want to sound to repetive, So I agree with what the others have said. This was a fantastic piece. Keep it up! 5/5 [Though I would rate higher cause I loved it, But I can't]

`taleee xx

I liked the way you could like... i dont know how to explain it. You could relate to this poem with different circumstances... like.. many people can relate to this in many different ways... like i interpreted it as if you feel stuck inside yourself in this poem... i really love your work and im definately adding you to my favorites 5/5 -jen-

This poem is great, it made me feel the desperation of being trapped, especially with the last stanza.

Great job! 5/5

Keep writing.

I love it! I love the rhythm of it and some amazing imagery made. Great job XD

Another rather low poem. But it's extremely well written. The word flow is rather good. A great poem.x