Slip away

by firexflys   May 17, 2006


SLIP AWAY

I see my flaws written all over your face
In this moment, in this place
I'd wish you wrap me up in your arms
I want you to save me from all harm

And I know you see the tears in my eyes
And in my mind I can hear your sigh
I thought I could be strong
But we both know I'm wrong

I see I'm so selfish
And I even my own flaws
I wish I could make it right
On this day on this night

And I know I have never been good enough
I know you see I was never that tough
So just let me slip away (slip away)
Baby just let me slip away

©Written by fireXfly

R/R/C i'll do the same.

this i got the from a movie. well the idea

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joyo

    I liked it. I really did.

  • 17 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Hey that was great the only bit of constructive critisism is perhaps if you changed the rhyming scheme from aabbccddeeff to ababcdcdeeff maybe it would have more depth. But I don't know it was pretty good anyway
    much love
    Aaron (remo) xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Very t0uching g0od j0b 0n this 0ne t0o!

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra