Diffrent Ways

by Emma   May 18, 2006


We are going
our different ways
With all this crap
left to say

Yet it seems like
no one can see
how much you
actually mean to me

And it just
Seems like you don't care
I cant help it but
I begin to shed a tear

I wish i could
Begin to believe
in you, instead of
watching you leave...

Please read and comment
~Emma~

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  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    I like this poem it is very good 5/5 keep up the good work love linda

  • 17 years ago

    by Kim

    I liked how this was a shorter poem, it conveyed more emotion, like the narator was just so distressed long sentences didn't come easily, I don't know if that makes sense but I thought it added to the overall effect of the poem ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Summer

    It's shorter that alot of poems I read, But thats mostly what Ive been writing lately too. I love this poem, it's got alot of emotion, but you can't really tell who towards like a family member, friend, or certain someone

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Really nice poem, it flowed well and there were some good rhymes. Good ending too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I really liked this. I can kinda relate. I don't know if this was about a friend or boyfriend. But in my eyes it was about a friend. Anywho..Back to the poem. It was really well done. Though the stanza's were short, You got your message across, And I could feel the emotions. Great poem! 5/5

    `taleee xx