by Wasted Fake Smiles May 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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The rain outside, like the pitter-patter of feet, |
by Jenna Balkin
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I like how you made that rhyme...some of the rhymed words are so good!! |
by Jessica
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Wow! that was great! it flowed well and the emotion was just oozing out! keep it up! 5/5 |
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Beautiful. |
by PURE HEART
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Wow! so sad and full of pain..i hope u r doing fine dear...... |