Life

by josh mills   May 19, 2006


All i feel is despair
life is so unfair
nowadays i just don't care
my smile is rare
my frown plenty
everyday i feel so empty
i feel nothing inside
there's no where to hide
as my eyes water like a rising tide
i realize no ones on my side.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

    thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Thats so sad :(:(

    ill b on your side
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    I really like ur poem........5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    This is by far my favorite poem you have written

    I feel nothing inside
    there's no where to hide
    as my eyes water like a rising tide
    i realize no ones on my side.
    ^^^^fav. part

    keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by josh mills

    Thank you everyone for your comments

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