30 Seconds Silence

by DancingForGod   May 21, 2006


I call him
We talk
We laugh
We sit
Silence descends
Forever appears in 30 seconds time
We sit silently
Not waiting for anything
Just sitting
No sounds
Other than breathing
Comfortable
Not uneasy
Just knowing he's there
Listening for my breathing
As I listen for his
Imagining his arms
Clasped tightly around me
In silence we sit
Racking up phone minutes
Without a care in the world
But the love of the person on the other end

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nee

    To tell the truth, I didnt get the meaning of your poem...
    I dunno why maybe its something In ME or maybe I didn't focus that much!
    I know I like the poem somehow, it ain't that bad that I even gave it a 5 =D lol, the simple way you wrote it with, made it sweet actually!

    Maybe YOU are the one who will be able to get it because you are the one who wrote it !
    Good Luck With The Comings!
    T.C
    NemO x0x0x0x0

    Thanks for your sweet comment =) meant alot! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    I love poems in this Format..When it rhymes..lol
    This poem was still good
    Deeply Expressed and detailed
    with the 30 seconds seeming forever
    Great job
    I liked it
    5/5
    ~MF~

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