This flame

by missy   May 21, 2006


I love you most, when a new day has come,
and the present one has passed.
This love is like flame, that will forever lasts.
at night I'm filled with thoughts,
all them being about you.
Sometimes I feel lost, I don't know what to do.
My love confuses me and changes my personality.
I just want to be with you, turn my fanatsies into reality.

Need your arms around me for protection,
I'd do anything for you without objection.
The only thing desired in return,
is that you help this flame to forever burn.
Don't be afraid just take my hand,
let's walk together, help each other stand.
side by side I'll go all the way,
the decision is up to you...
will you go or stay?

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  • 17 years ago

    by adie

    I thought it was really good. i especially like the second part

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked your poem - nice and sweet... May love treat you kindly.

  • 17 years ago

    by MiRANdA

    This poem.. inspires me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    I like this poem, I especially liked the point that came across with it. =)

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by in spite of love

    Okay, well here this goes...
    Your rhyme scheme kinda sucked, and the flow... didn't flow... at all. I was extreamly disapointed... You should have probably made it into more than two stanzas because - it was horrible. I would rate this a two, so I'm not rating.
    Please, dont take offense. And yeah, I don't know what kind of person you are, but read my poems and rate justly. ^-^ But other than all that crap, I kinda liked the point.

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