I am... (revised)

Well, I don't actually know what 'revised' means, but if it means I changed it for the better, then yay! I've used it right! lol. :P. Anywho, this is a much changed version of the other one that has always annoyed me a little bit... I like this one a little more :). Tell me what you think? The favour is always returned, Thanks to everyone, friend or stranger soon to be friend:P. :) -Stefhy

I am hidden curiousity
Is this where you belong?
Can you hear those distant screams,
Are they your own?
Try to breathe one last time.
I am shadowed emotion
As you try to find yourself.
You're the only stranger left
And you try so hard to meet this acquaintance
Reach out and touch her, go ahead.
Just don't cry for her when she breaks.
I am shattered truths
Understand that secrets will only drench you're heart in fear
Don't tell yourself it's for the best
Even dreams aren't enough to make it the best
Look, reach and feel just once more
Or she'll run too far away
I am her