My Prince

by smile   May 23, 2006


Here i am,
Locked in my cage,
Exposed flesh,
I work as your slave.

Yes sir,
No sir,
You hit me so hard,
My screams are heard from afar.

Maybe you'll grow tired of my pain,
Perhaps you'll for get the thrill you gain.
Someday i'll be free,
My prince will come and rescue me.

about my ex-bf, he really really did treat me bad. it was a difficult relationship, which i thought i'd never get out of. He was possesive and evil, which i found out from the start, but kept at it because i became depentant on him, which is a mistake i shall never ever make again!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gabriel Antonio White

    Good poem, i think that its good and that some times is the awful truth about things. thx for the other comment and i hope your next/present boyfriend is better, because i cant stand the thought of a girl being badly treated. later

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    Aww that is sad...its really good..thanx for yer comments on mine:) awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ .. His Silent Fan .. ღ

    Man! That was deep...I'm glad you left the evil X ^-^ No one should treat a girl like that....Oh! By the way, Thnx for the comment and the rating!^-^ Really appreciate that, cuz I'm new on this site ^-^.
    Really great poem! Hope everyone who had a bad relationship, read this poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqueline aka heartz

    Hi thank u for commenting on one of my poems.
    Want to let u know that i really like this poem, i know what u went through.
    Im glad u got to let go of him, even if it wasn't easy. Hang in there.

    Great job!! 5/5
    Take care!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Glad you won't make that mistake again.. i had domestic violence in my last relationship and like you stuck at it for way too long.. slight difference tho.. it was female, but she had a lot of power behind the blows too.. really enjoying readin ya poems btw xx

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