Comments : My thoughts roll down in his tears

  • 17 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Every line of that poem was the greatest ever.....5/5.....got me in tears too huni. thats a fukin awsum poem.....i loved it.

    mwahz
    sonam

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey welcome back after exactly 3 months u hv posted a beautiful poem, its full of sadness and a true desire of a helping soul has been potrayed here.
    I hope u wont stop again.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Heyy ipsi ,

    I hope u fine , the poem is very sad n deep ,as usual u penned it beautifully.
    To be there wen sumone needs u is biggest service in every relationship.

    Take care
    love
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    I really like the 4th and 5th verses

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven

    Wow! can i just hand my leader ship to you? haha! cause i pretty much lost to this poem.. cause it's so good! haha o well =/ i should keep up the work ! hehe nice poem by the way!
    -love Steven (club master :P)

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Wow... Powerful and emotional. I can feel the words coming from the bottom of your heart and the love you have for him. Great write. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi! It's a beautiful poem... So emotionaly strong... And the end is also very nice... Great wirte Ipsita!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Great poem, very nicely written, thought it was very emotional and quite powerful in places

    well done

    dave x

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel leigh

    You are an amazing writer and express what you feel truly. You almost made me cry. you're a great writer! keep it up!
    Rach

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Wut a poem!it bears some humble and great meanings.

    All the Best,
    Wishy

  • 17 years ago

    by Ban Me!

    Omg, this made me go all cold.
    dayum girl, you got talent, im gonna look forward to learning from you,

    and thanks for posting this, it's great

  • 17 years ago

    by Welshy

    Hey Ipsita,
    its me again...
    Just to let you know i have this new account...
    got targetted by a psycho down voter lol

    This poem still rocks!!!

    Mike aka
    ~†H€~Lø§†~ØÑ€~™
    ~Ñĭĝћŧ ~ Ŵřĩŧęŗ~™

  • 17 years ago

    by Welshy

    Ok so the above says
    night writer
    and the lost one
    lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Ali

    Masterfully done! Each and everything is just so right about it!

    Thats all I can say.

    Keep writing

    Ali

  • 17 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Gr8! very touching. ur words have expressed ur feelings dear!
    wonderful poem!

    luv

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rakesh

    Nice poem..very expressive..u hav done all I cld do to express love for another..very touching..Nice work :)