I've had enough now

by ♥broken fairytales♥   May 25, 2006


I don't want to be the hurting one no more
I just want someone to adore
I don't want to feel all the pain
I don't want to cry over and over again

I hate being like this
Never feeling a loving kiss
Just fun,thats what everyone wants from me
I wish that they could truly see

I want someone to love me
For the person i can be
Not for my body or my face
I just want someone who knows there place

People don't see
What their actually doing to me
The hurt their causing me inside
my heart has just died

i'm fed up of trusing all the guys
when behind it all is secrets and lies
I've had enough of this living hell
I just want to stay that day i fell

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  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. Just a few minor things to correct... "there place" should be "their place"... "their actually doing" and "their causing" should be "they're actually doing" and "they're causing"... "trusing" should be "trusting". Sorry, don't mean to seem like picking apart your poem. Good write otherwise.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Cosmic*Whispers*

    Oh my god baby this is beautiful, i thought everything was going well?!?!?!

    Talk soon
    I Love Yu
    Xx-me-xX

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem very good love the rhyme keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow...

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