Dying inside

by Resplendant Rose   May 26, 2006


Why arent you even trying?
cant you see our love is dying?
you just walk right by me
without seeing the silent plea
welling up in my eyes
then you tell me your lies
Jake i really love you
so give me a freaking clue
I cant just sit here and wait
if all you feel is hate
I thought it was so good
but maybe I misunderstood
show me that you still love me
cuz this crap is killing me

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  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Relitvly shrt, but very well composed. the rhymes seem unforced but at times do appear to take the readers interest off the main content as they are slightly overpowering in places. but when looking at the entire peice this is not a major issue.

    the content is well portrayed and runs well throughout with no obvious areas of weakness.

    5/5

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