It's All Over

by Kristina   May 28, 2006


While I sit there on the floor,
My depression is growing,
I write a suicide note,
Cause I can't take the pain no more.
I take a glass cup and throw it on the ground,
I watch it hit the floor and shatter,
I pick up a piece of glass,
I push it into my skin,
And make a line across my wrist,
I watch, till the blood seeps through my flesh,
I watch, the pain paralyzes my body,
As I lay in my blood on the floor,
I take my last breath, and smile,
I say to myself
"It's all over now, no more pretending."

Copyright © November 23, 2005 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this was sad:[ but you did a great job writing it and i gave it a 5/5. never stop writing poems because every poem you write will make you a better writer everytime!:]

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I didn't really like the line,
    "Cause I can't take the pain no more."
    Too much slang for my liking, which isn't very poetic.

    But good stuff still, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    As I lay in my blood on the floor,
    I take my last breath, and smile,
    I say to myself
    "It's all over now, no more pretending."

    sometimes i just feel like ending it all... and i think that... but i cant bring myself to end it all... because i dont want to heart anyone that might love me. great write, 5/5 -Jen-

  • 17 years ago

    by Mycquel

    Wow! That was deep! I truely hope it was just a poem! Love life and live for the moment!

  • 17 years ago

    by Summer

    Its a really emotional poem and very well written, but its a topic thats written a million times before and you managed to pull if off as your own w/ the last line. ;) great job

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