by Jenny May 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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A drop of tear |
by Kristen
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AWWWW..that is soo cute and good... |
by dee
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Remember when u read some of your poems to me.. haha.. well i just read that in my head and oddly enough it was like u were reading it to me. pretty intense though.. great poem. |
by Jessica
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This was pretty good.. although the rhymes were predictable.. maybe you should try not rhyming your poems and instead using more words that describe your emotions more in detail.. good write though.. 3/5 |
by Cyma Khan
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Really nice poem i like it |