by nadsyy Jun 2, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
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I have a friend who hugs you |
by Meena Krish
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This just made me smile while reading it. Its |
by Fallen Angel
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Gd |
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That was very beautiful & sweet, Nadia! Actually it cheered me up, thanks! Well the rhyme was very well achieved and I loved the whole poem, although I thought it would turn differently in the last verse to end with something like" and that friend, my dear, is me". Anyway, keep writing! |
by BlueDreams
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Great penned, simply but beautiful ended, keep them coming and thanks for your nice comment, have a great weekend, take care. |