A temporary parting

by Sar   Jun 2, 2006


The silence screams,
its loud,
its torture,
it deafens me as i watch you,
your bleeding,
the knife falls from your hand,
clutters to the ground,
you stand,
a hole in your heart,
an emptiness in mine

a fallen angel,
i see pain in your eyes,
you turn to me and say,
do not mourn,
for no longer am i lost
now i am free,
this isn't goodbye, just a temporary parting,
until we meet again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great poem...sad though...but but beautiful work!!!....so deep and touching!!...loved it!
    Kp it up!5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Hey a really emotional poem. thought it was very deep and very creative. Thanks for the comment aswell

    dave x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that is soo sad! excellent work! it has a lot of emotion, a good flow, and is not too long! great write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Very good poem, it was sad, and I enjoyed reading it. I agree with what Talee said aswell. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. For a non-rhyming poem, I thought you did a great job on it. I really like those last two lines aswell. They stood out the most to me. Keep it up =P 5/5

    `Taleee xx

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