Awwww this poem is truly amazing, that is a great poem to jsut give to someone you love. I hope the person it' about feels truly honored. great job. 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

A cute one

all the best

You used a bit of Spanish, Eh? It was really good. And triolets are hard, And to do one of these and use another language in it, While making it sound good and everything, You did an awesome job on that. Really good peice!

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Aww thats sweet....5/5 que lindo!!

xoxo
Diana

p.s. if u dnt mind it wud mean a lot to me if u cud comment on sum of my latest poems. thank u!!!!

favor will be returned!! :)

Wow! nice! it's really sweet... i love it! 5/5

Nice one!

Spanish...sexy

Beautiful. the way you used two languages really made it stand out somewhat to a point. It was short but powerful and really sweet. Keep it up!

It was really beautiful for such a short poem. I loved how you used the spanish.

Just sexy and sweet i gotta add you to my favorites for that read some of my stuff and add me to your favs if you like what your reading

Fantastic. Sometimes less is more, and this works so well for that very reason.. Very personal, and very honest. I really love it. 5/5, hunny. xx

I love this poem! It is nice how u put some spanish in it! I am a spanish girl and I understood the spanish! I love it! Good Job! 5/5

It's a triolet. They have 8 lines.

Its a nice lil poem!!!...cute, simple and sweet:):)/,..and ignor all those haters...lol, they're just jealous:0:)

I love it I love spanish and you're poem is soo romantic....please check out some of my stuff

Cathylee

Wow! Good job! It's really sweet and the spanish in it just makes it even better! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem too, it meant a lot!

-Stephanie-

It's very romantic when you add another language into your poem. Great job>>3rd done