Childhood screams

Wow, i really loved this poem, it was short but right to the point, it was great.

Much love,

Steph

P.s: you misspelled victim

I like the poem, its very nice, except there are many errors. I was forced to give it a {4/5}. For example, here should be hear, its the verb to hear, not here as in there. Also childhood is one word, and victim is spelled with a "c". You wrote the worse it getts, there should be one t. And also "realise" should be "realize". Lastly the format is a bit strange, you should capitalise all the words at the beginning of the lines, and in your case each line should be one sentence, some are doubled.

[PygmyPuff]

Beautiful sad powerful

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write so beautifully

Laura

Hmm. It had alot of spelling mistakes and the form and wha tnot was odd and threw me off, I like the idea behind the poem, just it was a little weird, maybe you could make it more descriptive? Or longer? But anyway I still gave it a five.

Hey
awsome poem!!keep up the good work if u ever wanna talk let me know dont be a stranger 5/5always

kate