To My Friend

by Ike Dizzle   Jun 2, 2006


The one Ive been searching for
The one and only
The one I like
To keep me from being lonely

The one who will
Always be there
The one who will
Always care

It seems as if Ive always known you
You were always there for me
Every time I see you
My body is filled with glee

Please dont let this question
Lead our friendship astray
Will you go out with me?
Javonta

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked the first stanza the best, because of the way it flowed.

    I think that this is always something that happens in life - two friends and one gets feeling for the other, so good job writing about it.

    Brad

    P.S. Sorry it took so long to comment back, I've been a busy boy, lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    U would do anything to make a girl go out wit you is yo devoteness.. Awwww, this poem is so touchy..

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Great poem! And thanks for the comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. thats so sweett! hehe.. it really made me smile.. that last stanza was just so cute.. the emotion in this poem is clear, and the flow is good, but maybe you could add a little more detail to the descriptions and such.. excellent write though! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. It was so sweet and well written. It had a nice flow. and I think you expressed in it very well...
    Oh thanks for the comment

    -Shannon

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