Never trust your dreams...Or real life..

by Turtle   Jun 2, 2006


Somehow its night
walking down the street
Everything is quiet
I'm stumbling on my feet

I see the white light
and then it starts to rain
But the rain is red
Red from all my pain

The blood, it gets louder
on the pebbles the rain screams
My knees turn weak and i get real scared
But my courage i have to redeem

i stand up straight
"I'm NOT AFRAID!!"
The street leads to a hospital
To the place where i was made

I reach the door
To open it
The blood stops
Slowly
Bit by bit

The door opens by itself
And my legs walk inside
This hospital is empty
In all this white i cannot hide

In a panic i rush around
Searching for someone to help
When i realize what is happening
I give out a yelp

The place turns into nothing but darkness
and now i am terrified
The light flickers back on
My heart stopped and i nearly died

i was back in the street
Now there were houses on the ground
The monster must have heard me
Because he turned around

I ran behind the houses
And the monster disapeared
Then blood washed away all the houses
And what happened was what i had feared

The monster was gone
And now there was just a shadow
But this shadow was very powerful
And the wind began to blow

I lifted up into the air
Then the magic man spoke up
'Die' he said in a flash
And then i woke up

In a cold sweat i sat
And thought about the shadow man
I rolled over in my bed
And there he lay with a knife in his hand.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    An unusuaul twist at the end, this poem kept my attention all the way through which is very good for such a long poem.

    in your effort to rhyme however you have occasionally used too many syllables in a line which interrupts the flow.

    -biscuit-

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

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    lol I think this poem is very well written, but there are a few grammatical errors involving capitalization. You should fix them then the poem will be very nice.

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by redLatina

    Im so much amazed of your poem and i can relate

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    OOoooOOOooo.. Scawy.... DunDunDun.

    But I Don't Really Love It As Much As Your Others-Sorry. I Have To Honest((You Tell Me Not To Lie!!!)
    If I Could I'd Rate 4.5 But I Can't So I'll Go 5.

    XoXo

    Lauren

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