Get around. Don't want to forget

by Jamie   Jun 2, 2006


Not fineshed yet but yeah...

I need to feel your, happy ending
To just stop f.u.c.king, can't keep pretending
The love we once shared, is slipping deeper
Began to sell out and you get cheaper

Unconscious we fall, under contentment
This constant breaking, it builds resentment
So distance heightens, my temper stops short
F.u.c.ked him, lost my, sense of support

To hear you loved me, what's now so painful
Not always right, but so disdainful
Sorry follows those, who give in and forgive
I have let it go, for that I must relive

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i comented on my own poem...on accident lol...so ignore that if you comment it was definatly meant for someone else..weird huh

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  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I gave it a {4/5} because I don't think it has a right flow...Theres deffinite potential, so let me know when it is finished. I look forward to seeing the finished result.

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    Hey hows it going? i havn't heard from you in a long time, i havn't written anything for a long time until recently either though...so yes...this is awesome, i'm definatly more into rhyming but hey this was good i like the feelings expressed, i've never had it happen to me but i think you could understand how you felt...which is the point in writing..5/5 good job

  • 17 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    I love how all your poems keep there meaning and still just flow you have serious talent hun make use of it you hear! xxxxx

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