Words of a Broken Heart

by Mitsuki   Jun 3, 2006


Look at me,
What do you see?
A girl with an empty shell
or
A girl with a broken heart.

Love had betray me with all his might
Hope had escape me at a blink of an eye
Laughter was lost in a sea of doubt

Pain has found me, and glued itself to me
Fear has haunt me, day and night
Loneliness has lock me in this scary room

NO love, no hope, no happiness,
no me, only what i pretend to be

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  • 17 years ago

    by khobo

    Interesting ending

  • 17 years ago

    by Mycquel

    This is a very nice poem! I can strongly relate! Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Wow that's great. Keep this up. You're on your way to a whole lot of awards. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

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  • 17 years ago

    by *~So HeLpLeSs WhEn I lOoK iNtO hIs EyEs~*

    I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM! ITS VERY NICELY DONE! BY THE WAY THNX FOR DA COMMENT!

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