Do i..... ©

by LostInLife!   Feb 19, 2004


Do i.....

Do i love you?
Do i hate you?
Do i forget about you?
Do i let my mind hold onto memories of you?

I don't know anymore,
You've played with my mind so much,
I can't seem to think straight.
My heart's saying one thing,
My mind's saying another!

All of this confusion,
Is caused one little thing,
The feelings my heart has for you,
And the feelings that my mind thinks.

xx xxx

hi-ya I've decided to write this poem without rhyme. i add mitt this isn't one of my best, but still its whats on my mind!
i would love to hear your comments!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    great poem. hope to read more soon

    best of wishes, good luck, and much more,
    Ashley

  • 20 years ago

    by Todd Geatz

    A poem with or without rhyme, is still a poem and you were able to make the reader feel as if they are the writer, if you know what I mean. anyways good job and keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Tony Alexander

    Good job, poems don't have to rhyme...they are just expressions of emotions. No one individual can set a guideline on how a poem must be written. It is only a release for the poet's heart.

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    This was a good poem. Poems dont have to rhyme, ones that dont rhyme can be just as good or better than ones that do (hehe almost all of mine dont rhyme). Ohh ya and i can totally relate to all this right now. I am also so confused on what i feel about this guy and am trying to figure out my feelings. Wishing you (and me) luck

  • 20 years ago

    by KeEzY

    THIS POEM IS REALL GOOD GIRL AND IT SEEMED LIKE IT CAME STR8 FROM THE HEART

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