The angel cut too deep...

by MadelineJayde   Jun 4, 2006


The precious little angel
with bruises on her face
cuts all up her arms
covered with linen and lace

she would always help others
anybody who was in pain
she listened to all their problems
but not once did she complain

as long as her friends were happy
it didn't matter if she was in pain
coz she knew if they found out
they would think she was insane

but all that seemed to change that day
when she couldn't hold in her pain
sitting outside crying to the world
her tears washed away by the rain

she held the blade so tight
thinking of the mistakes she made
knowing she was a failure in life
the agony inside never did fade

she sliced a design on her wrist
and cried while it bled bright red
feeling weak she feel to her knees
"i'm sorry!" is what it read

she lay on the cold hard ground
all she could do was weep
this was her final day in life
for the angel had cut too deep.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Awww so sad... I love the way you write so full of emotion! xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by endless tears

    Omg omg that is so great man i know just how you fell..
    seriously im just like that every singel day..
    butta good job..

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is great
    specialy the part
    she lay on the cold hard ground
    all she could do was weep
    this was her final day in life
    for the angel had cut too deep.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veronica

    Very Very good poem. I loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by GONE

    This is amazing.