Fire Movement (Haiku)

by Kim   Jun 4, 2006


Exotic flames dance
From the centre of the Earth
With molten beauty

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    Pretty pretty!!! I like it muchly. Fire is such a good topic for a haiku simply because of the symbolism behind it. Good job, baby!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Kim... This is a superb haiku... I totally adore this write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Haha, I'm guessing the core?.. what I'm wrong!?!?.. hehehe sorry, it's early in the morning, so I'm trying to humour myself :P

    Good job Kim! You are kicking butt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice haiku ^_^ I loved the way you worded it. Very well done! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 17 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Great Haiku Kim passionate and powerful with its subtly...