Hidden World

*i wrote this last night and as i did..i got chills...plz read/...i'd like to know what u think:):) Yea..a bit long..but plz dont let that stop u:):)

She seems so normal, just like us.
But she has a hidden land.
A world in which she enters,
But simply cannot stand.

Every time she's all alone,
Her mind will take her there,
She sits there under a dead tree,
And clutches at her hair.

The world inside her, hidden,
So none of us can see.
We think there's nothing wrong with her.
She cries to us in hidden plea.

No matter what she did,
Her thoughts would not obey.
They lock her in her hidden world,
And there she has to stay.

And every time she enters,
A creepy voice will speak.
It brings back all her deepest fears,
It knows they make her weak.

It makes her take infected needles,
And stab them underneath her nails.
It watches all this through her eyes,
And slowly it prevails.

The voice then brings her back inside,
And shows her future, present, past.
It knows her weaknesses too well,
It knows she has not long to last.

It shows her little girls and boys,
Who wished they weren't alone.
Be careful what you wish for,
To them the hidden world was shown.

The voice then later showed her,
What happened to them all,
They were all found in a dark room,
With six six six (666) upon the wall.

She tried to escape from this new world she found,
But trying to cut through the mist,
The only thing happening was her bloody hand,
Scratching her own torn up wrist.

The voice was too strong,
It knew way too much,
And finally she just gave in.
The voice in control.
She made three last pricks.
With her blood, on the wall
She wrote six six six (666).