I'm so confused

I sit and stare into the mountains, passed the flood.
Through the mist where you held me.
Keeping hold of treasures so far from home.

Into the distance where we once stood.
Promising that you'll always love me.
Hidding lies so close to our own.

Cleaning our wounds, our dryed out blood.
Taking my hand in yours, setting my heart free.
Speaking the truth and still not knowing.

basically the first lines from each 3 verses, go together, then the second lines, all go together and then final lines go together. i mixed them all up, as an expression of the confusion love has caused me. haha i know its rubbish...but experimental!!!
i personally don't like it!...
...WHAT DO YOU THINK?