Comments : Watch Me Fall

  • 13 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Though this was a very deep poem, so painful to read, I felt your anger and frustrations...Glad you got it out on paper. I hope you are okay hunni, I will write you back soon sweety, I promise!! I am always here for you no matter what!!

    Love always - Sabrina

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. This poem was so good. So much emotion in it. It was awesome! Keep up the good work 5/5 I might check out some more of your work soon =]


  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    Aww huniiiii
    awesome poem! I adored your 7th stanza! so amazing
    very well written hun I like it so much =)
    babe it isn't your fault I know you're busy enough!!!
    I don't come online that much thou! today I was in the hospital but thanx god everything is goin well..just felt like losin my conscious yesterday! tell u abt it l8r
    luv u
    study well =)

  • 13 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it so much!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Ah, this was great and wonderfully written. I hope everything is alright, you have a supreme way with using darkening and saddened words, it's so overwhelming, Keep it up! 5/5

    (Thank you for your comments on my poem! xxx)

  • Babe whos this about? i miss you gorguz i want to see you! ily ily ily ily ily!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Timothy B

    You are no mistake girl. U are presious to those willing to see deeper within U.