Your beautiful smile

by lana   Jun 7, 2006


You took
one long look
then you're smile
took me a while
to say
that was a beautiful day
i will never fight
that wonderful sight
i sore today
i couldn't even look away
even though its in the past
forever it will last
its something i can hold
for its a story to be told
as we walk hand in hand
our footprints together deep in the sand
i think back to that day
when all i could say
not a word to be spoken
our silence was not to be broken
as there was different sounds
all around
that day my heart was made
to never fade
so back to that day
when you smiled that beautiful way
now my heart i hold
its say its sold

all because your smile
my heart stopped a while

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  • 14 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Another great poem, good job. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 14 years ago

    by arunima gautam

    Another intense and brilliant poem. very nice. great work. keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Totally contradicted itself but i liked it.

    keep it up girl

    october xx

  • 15 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    That was a very pleasant poem, good job
    Thanks for your comment on dear journal
    much appreciated

  • 15 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    I can really relate to this poem cause I have a boyfriend and I love his smile! Good Job! hehe