Heartbreaking...

by Vane   Jun 8, 2006


There she was the perfect girl
With the perfect life
And the perfect boy

Under the moon they were
While they kissed
The night dyed away

Holding each other so tight
Like thye could never let go
They loved each other so much
That the thought of breaking up
Never came across

But then she met a boy
That it was hard to believe that he was real
They were so alike
They were water like ice
One late night he came to her house
And she realized that he was her perfect match

Then she called her boyfriend
And told him they werent meant to be
That she met another boy
That they couldnt continue on
He didnt comprehend
A thing she said
He got so mad he hung up the phone, took the gun
Went to her house and knocked on the door

She went to open the door
And he ran to her room
Looking for that someone
Who robed him of her heart

He pointed the gun to others boy head
With tears in his eyes he shot away
The girl came up
To find her soul mate dead
Her first love pointing the gun to his head
Saying "I love you" through tears and rage

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Wow amazing poem, powerful and true to some poeple, and others can relate, beautiful]

    ---tara

  • 17 years ago

    by samantha

    Wow..that was crazy

  • 17 years ago

    by briana

    ReAl GooD, gUrL;;
    iT wAs So SaD;;
    i LiKeD iT tHo;;
    KeeP uP tHe GooD wOrK.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    You are so good at writing!! keep it up!! the poem was super sad!!
    love ya!

  • Gud Story - i liked it , it told a story