Razor Razor

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   Jun 9, 2006


Razor, Razor, call my name
They all hate and stare
Save me from going insane
For there is no one there

I need someone who listens
Who will always be there
And as my blood will glisten
I know you are so fair

I hate people and him
But you I love so dear
He took my heart in sin
But with you I have no fear

Him I love so much
But he will care never
My mind is in a clutch
But yet I feel so clever

The pain that I am feeling
The tears will melt away
This is how I'm dealing
With the pain he plays

Razor cut me deep
Please take away my sorrow
Let my blood seep
He'll have a better tomorrow

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  • 17 years ago

    by stephyG

    Great poem. the rhyme fits perfectly. the content is deep and emotional. great from beginning to end. few can write this way. it flows very very well. great job. keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Irish Sweetheart

    I like this one. 5/5 Keep writing. Check out mine to please.

  • 17 years ago

    by YoU-nEvEr-NeW

    That was really good 5/5 i could tell that that had a lot of meaning too u and i no just how that feels will good job and if u get a chance will u read and comment on my poem sitting on bed waiting to die? thx much

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