Romance's Sweet Melody

by Bloomed Rose   Jun 9, 2006


A tune on the winds breath
the song of a blue bird
~
a fountain in the park
and the thousands of coins
bedding it
Each with its own casted wish
for love
~
varies couples walking by
holding hands
and staring into each others eyes
~
Nature's song
and Loves calling
together as one excerpt
from Romance's sweet melody
~
laying side by side
in front of the willow tree
staring up at the clouds
thinking about life
and romance itself . . .
wishing the whole world
could experience the same
happiness
as you do . . .
~
wishing every one
listened to a soft melody . . .

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol...this poem is indeed a very romantic write.very sweet!..you've expressed the poem n created a romantic atmosphere to the whole peice!!..Ver well done!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by bmichelle

    Hmmmmm who could you possibly be talking (or in this case, writing) about? I might have to think about that one for a while. that was really good though Bob. :)
    luv ya as long as i live
    Fredd... is going insane! hahaha

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Very nice work! I loved the emotion and depth you put toward this piece. Nicely done!

    -Jennifer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Diablo de amor

    Now that is a good poem! thanks for reading mine and i've quite enjoyed yours aswell! well take care and tell leslie(Naughty chica) to take care! seeya!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Your poem was very beautiful, it describes love and romance very well. It was great!!!
    Stephanie

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