Time changes

by paddy   Feb 21, 2004


We where young,wild and free
those where the younger years
you and me
nothing can take you away from us
we\'ve been down that road before
thats all over now
never to go back on
there where good and bad times
we can make amends
you turned my world around
you picked me up when i was down
you where there when i needed you most
a shoulder to cry on you where there
thank you it seems nothing
by far

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  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    Sounds like you met a special someone young in your life, and now they are gone. Found this poem really sad, `turned my world around` I remember saying those exact words after a very painful and messy brake up. To loose someone you love after you have invited them into your heart only for it to be wrenched out leaves you incomplete for a while. Well thats how it effected me anyway and your painful lines brought it all back! I hated it and loved it at the same time (if you know what I mean) truely a sign of great art. Excellent stuff BrokenHeart! I applaud you

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    thank u all for your kind commets
    they mean so much to me esp the ones from my dear friends
    thank you
    lorna
    xxx

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