The Tale of Daniel la Fey

by Sean Allen   Jun 12, 2006


A story of sadness
and of bad luck
is the tale I tell today;
'tis the story of how
all of our children
were taken - spirited away!

The twelfth mark of midnight struck
and in crept Daniel la Fey,
the mysterious fiddler who earlier played
a concert without taking pay.

As he walked through the city
he played a little ditty
to keep all his foes at bay.
Using a magic fiddle
he played just a little
the gay song of Daniel la Fey.

He'd enter a house
eyes glowing red;
a word in their ear,
a mark on their head,
and soon the children,
well they were all out of bed
and were captives to his tune.

He played not for money;
what he wanted the most
was the souls of young people
to satiate his needs as a ghost--

Well this was a sad story
'bout that fateful day
when that dreaded spirit
known as Daniel la Fey
marched into town and
with his tune, led them astray
down to the graveyard
where he had his way
and stole our town's future;
he spirited all their souls away!

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  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    Not much else to add^...

    Good choice of words. Maybe a little choppy in the beggining, but it was well written.

    mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I adore this piece, I really do.
    The title is certainly eye catching, and the poem itself is wonderfully well written~
    Also, thumbs up for using the word "gay" and actually doing it poetic justice, I've yet to see someone else do that. 5/5, fantastic work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Hehe, I like this poem. i wrote a sing song tale like this. i'll post it now!

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Creepy! lol. I really liked this ones though.

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    WELL I LOVED IT TOO
    VERY WELL WRITTEN
    YOUR A GREAT WRITER AND KEEP YOUR WORK UP

    WELL DONE

    LANA