Take My Breath Away...

by .::Lovely*Letdown::.   Jun 13, 2006


Wrap your arms around my waist, and see how i MELT...
I\'m under your spell now...
Whatever you say GOES.
I'm lost in you...
I drown in your eyes everytime you trace me in your mind.
I'm gasping for air, but I long to drown once more.
My knees tremble everytime you come closer...
And I realize once again how much I long for your presence.
Our hearts are entangled, our minds are too.
I have to ask you one question...
Hold me close, and NEVER let me go...because that's where i feel safe and at home.
Take my breathe away...
Everytime you speak,
Everytime you touch me,
Everytime you're AROUND.
And you always leave me knowing...
I will NEVER get enough of you....

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  • 17 years ago

    by ♥jUsTlOvEmE♥

    Wow, this poem is amazing.. there just arent words to say how good your poetry is, i believe you have a gift.. keep up the good work.. xOx 5/5 && Thanks for the comment on my poem The Reason We Fall :)

    ..x.. Amanda ..x..

  • 17 years ago

    by brianna

    I really like that poem. you are so down to earth with it and that makes it 5 times better than what i can do. i think it is beautiful and if you keep writing the way that you do, you will go soooo far. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth_Cat

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  • 17 years ago

    by Driver

    Wow... i like this poem... you really put forth your emotions into them... well written too....
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  • 17 years ago

    by SomeonesAngel

    Thank you for your comment on one of my poems really apreciated seems you also have a talent hehe. well done. 5 for you. and your now on my favorites. Thank you so much

    Ayesha

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