Your state

by lana   Jun 14, 2006


You lie to me
Cant you see
Your hurting me

The yelling
The swearing
Instead of that
Your meant to be caring

You say you hate
Only when your in a state
But the pain
Is still a stain

I am sorry
But i do worry
Because if all you do
Is hate
It will be tooo Late

To become
Someone who can love

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  • 19 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Awww i love it. its sad but i like it. thanx for the comment on my poem.. but i cant help but give up.. ne ways amazing poem. i love it. keep it up
    take care
    luve angie

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Nicely written
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Willow

    Oh thats beautiful. u poor person. i hope things get better for u. thanx for the comment too. i'm trying to release in poems not my arm.
    love willow xxoo

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Mmm. That's sad, but I liked it. I thought the general wording and flow was good/

  • 19 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Kool

    october xx

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