The Day You Passed Away

by Ellen   Jun 15, 2006


That day so long ago,
the day nothing was okay,
the day i stopped smiling,
was the day you passed away.
On the outside i always smile,
but its all just a lie,
when i'm all by myself,
i just get on my knees and cry.
Because i feel so much hurt,
i feel so much pain,
i feel like i'm dying,
because without you nothing is the same...

This is a work in progress its about my beautiful cousin who died a couple of months ago when she was only 17.

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  • 19 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Beautiful start, I think you should contunue it. So far, sounds like a masterpiece, great job!

    xoxoxo Haley

    ps thnx for your comment on my poem

  • 19 years ago

    by smile

    This is a truly deep poem
    full of your love
    i hope you can find the right words to express your feelings, and all the best.
    This is a beautiful poem, and i hope you and everyones else can enjoy it

    best wishes,

    **smile**

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