Beautiful Death

by LadyPearl   Jun 16, 2006


Into a tower where dazzling crystals lined the walls
Shadows of people drifting in the stillness of time
A glass elevator centered in the room calls
Its sound stretching in echos of a chime

My Heart throbs as the sky approaches near
My fingers firmly upon the window plane
Licking away my cascading, suffering tears
I peer into the world in front with a quiet pain

Jagged rocks line the white beaches below
luscious Water battling the dangerous shores
I lie on my back to enjoy this last tranquil show
Readying myself to close my final living doors

With a push of button, I wavered from the air
Just a step to death, to renew myself with dreams
It was time to split the sadness I shared
Into the illusions, I thrust myself with death's streams

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  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Wowo, this poem was so sad. It was very well written. You did an awesome job on it. 5/5 Loretta

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow, nicely done...I really enjoyed this peice. There's not much to say.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    It was great, but i got confused! maybe that's just me, i dont know but from what i udnerstood it was awesome

  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    Mmmm....very, very well written. Good use of imagery (I love the description of the water battling with the shore).

    This is a well crafted poem...your use of diction is wonderful. I think that this is my favorite stanza:

    "My Heart throbs as the sky approaches near
    My fingers firmly upon the window plane
    Licking away my cascading, suffering tears
    I peer into the world in front with a quiet pain"

    Just gorgeous!

    Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow.....amazing poem!!! 5/5 One of those poems that you read over and over taking in the whole thing----great work

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