by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child Jun 16, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
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It was a disheveled mess, |
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I really liked this one...Very strong and different from a lot of poems you read. I'm not much into your format/flow of writing though.. |
by LadyPearl
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Great use of words, even though I didn't understand all of it lol. Wonderful Job |
by PygmyPuff
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Its really good, the only thing you can do to improve it would be to even out the stanzas. Some are really deep adn long and thick, while others are just "there". {5/5} |