Return of Rain (A Haiku)

The poem was diff, i liked it

Wow.. who gave you a four for that, huh? lol.. this definetely deserves only perfect 5's! this was powerful and yet so beautiful at the same time.. your descriptions really appeal to the senses.. just reading those three lines made me want to read so much more! truly excellent write! 5/5

The imagery in this poem is beautiful, really creates a strong picture in your mind, and is incredibly calming.

Like it.

A very gentle poem, rather calming. A very nice haiku indeed.

Hmm.. It's hard to comment haiku's when they're so small lol. But this was pretty good I thought. I liked the second line alot. I thought that was great. But with this line:
"The dry, yellow grass"
Do you need the comma there? It just sounded abit weird reading it like that. Still a really great haiku though. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.