Somewhere

by BlueDreams   Jun 20, 2006


Somewhere, in my empty room
Every moment I'm awake
Somewhere, i write a world for you
From the depth of my heart
Can you still read me? Do you still see?
You're all I showed my emotions.

Somewhere, the sun start to rises
In my mind I see you beside me
Somewhere, I cradle the phone
Your voice lingers in my ears
Can you still hear me? Do you still see?
You're all I am and will ever be.

Somewhere, the rain starts to fall
And in my heart, I hold you close to me
Somewhere, I reach out my hand
Your fingers entwine with mine
Can you still feel me? Do you still see?
You're all I want and will ever need.

Somewhere, the birds begin to sing
And in my soul I ache to have you near me
Somewhere, I breathe a soft lonely sigh
Your whispers echo in my mind
Can you still touch me? Do you still see?
You're all I dream that forever we'll be.

Somewhere, the clouds drift slowly by
And in my dreams I hear your laugh
Somewhere, I look shyly at the ground
Your eyes meet with mine
Can you still need me? Do you still see?
You're all I care about and it'll always be.

Somewhere, across thousands of miles
My heart looks to the stars and smiles
Somewhere, in a far distant corner of my mind,
Are those many regrets I did find
Can you still love me? Do you still see?
You are my one and only one I love.

There is the glow of a smile a word
And in an instant knew!

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece is touchingly beautiful, filled with emotions. The first stanza is my favorite, but the rest of the poem is great, too. Another one flawless.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Each time you become greater and greater. welcome to my favorite list.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Awww this is very great
    I love the reptition in every stanza, very greatly written
    I can truly understand these feelings of questioning and wonders!
    great choice of words!

    I've to say that I adore your poetry..you always write them in a good way and you can make the reader truly inspired also =)

    Keep the excellent work up
    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess Love

    "Somewhere, across thousands of miles
    My heart looks to the stars and smiles
    Somewhere, in a far distant corner of my mind,
    Are those many regrets I did find
    Can you still love me? Do you still see?
    You are my one and only one I love."

    You know what, I soooo loved that stanza, it was remarkable. Your entire poem was excellent. You have a different style of writing and I just love that. Keep them coming my friend.

    Best Wishes
    Michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a very touching piece. i love the way uve structured this poem. great use of words. good job. keep it up xx
    love from
    dora