Aww... sweetie... AWESOMENESS!!! u write better poetry than me... liar. saying im better, pssh.

luv ya.

5/5

Woah. gr8 work. amazing actually. 5/5 loved ur use of wording.

Aww.. That poem made me cry.. I can relate to it in a way.. It held a lot of emotion. Great job!

You make me feel...
Like I have the heart
That you say was in me...
All along.

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That part was great!

I found this a little insperational. Not sure why. But I just did.

I don't think there's anything in this poem that you would need to change, I loved it the way it was. ^_^ Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I really enjoyed this poem...Nice job...
Emma 5/5

Aww that was so beautiful! Excellent word choice and format. This poem was so unique and different but it had such a luring tone to it! I loved it! Thank you for your comment on my poem, it is always very much appreciated! Keep up your good work 5/5

Wow really really good thanks for all the comments this one made me smile because well this is what my poem "save me" is all about finding but you are def. good keep it up

Everyone needs a person in their life like this! i loved this. 5/5

The structure is quite interetsing and makes it sound more dramatic. an all-round wonderful poem. rock on. very kool.
-Suz

Aw.. I love this poem. It's so amazing how certain people can change you for the better. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and I like the whole meaning behind it. The opening stanza really worked well for this as did the closing. 5/5*

BEAUTIFUL write and nice formatting. Excellent. Really inspiring poem in many different ways.
5/5

As always~ Kate

Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

The repetition of teh first stanza as the last was very effective. i enjoyed reading this in every essence and gladly give u 5/5

Dammit i commented twice. argh! 3 times now! oh well, ur gain : D lol