All dEaD

by Jamie   Jun 21, 2006


See me clearly through shaded ebony
Far away from the controls inside of me
Do not lace me up, for I will come undone
Just please shut up, while I find somewhere to run

My distraction - Unwelcome obsession
My condition - Your viewer discretion
My addiction - Unfit affliction
My ambition - Thrown into ignition

Advisory - (f.u.c.k) You - can't advise me
Take it down - (yes) I'll - let you let me drown

Toss it up to its fall
We all know you want it all
So happy I was so elated
Forget it for, it's complicated
And f.u.c.k you for, you have betrayed it
Us
Never been locked out inside
Lay naked inside out as I
Make this last
I want to see its shadow
Forget it all
I want to see you hallow

Tell me again - how
You're All dEaD

*hate...but yeah this probably has a super weird flow cause you really have to read it with the right pausing and what not i tried dashes and commas and all that good punctuation crap but i dont know if it helped or f.u.cked it up more lol...but thanks again if you read this

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  • 17 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Nah hun i found the flow of it pretty good! 5/5 xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Loved it- and the punctuation helped a lot-i dont know if I read it with the right rhythym, but the way I did sounded good. 5/5